Monday, December 27, 2010
Oblivious to change
People come and people go.
Nothing much you can do.
Except let go of the gone
New ones look forward to.
May be sick of being alone
But you are never lonely.
The world may go to another world
Remember, you're with you only
Adjusting to life as it comes
Is a good thing, not only one.
Be oblivious to life and change
There, dear lies the real fun.
ps:
I wrote this as a comment on one of the blogs I follow. Guess, it turned out good.
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3 comments:
Words excel when you paint the picturesque scenery .. Keep it up
Well well, would like to know what the author of the blog commented after you gave this comment....
BTW, one thing i notice here is that, each stanza has a perfect third line for sure-
1st -> Except letting go of the gone
2nd -> The world may go to another world
3rd -> Be oblivious to life and change
That is a nice observation Harpreet. Btw the lady did not comment after I did. :-(
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