Jackasses move the
world
in saddles rupturing
skin
oozing splendid red
blood
down thin steadfast
legs
(P.S. This is in response to promts at 3WW (Jackass, Rupture, Splendid) and also at Poets United - Verse First where the notion was The Red Wheelbarrow a beautiful poem by William Carlos Williams. Take a look. Keeping things simple is most complicated.
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
)
world
in saddles rupturing
skin
oozing splendid red
blood
down thin steadfast
legs
(P.S. This is in response to promts at 3WW (Jackass, Rupture, Splendid) and also at Poets United - Verse First where the notion was The Red Wheelbarrow a beautiful poem by William Carlos Williams. Take a look. Keeping things simple is most complicated.
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
)
7 comments:
That does seem to be the case! Very well done =)
beautiful & quite deep.
sadly this is true
...could be fun... could be painful... smiles...
The key was the simplicity. The result is merely excellent!
oh! well said!
"oozing splendid red
blood"
does sound splendid. :D
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